First draft feedback
To add more character and location description, needs to be a bit longer, and to have lower case. I added a lot more description in the describing of each scene for the second draft along with getting the right layout so it was in upper case. I added to the story for it to be 5 pages long.
Second draft corrections
I got my second draft back I got some more feedback. This was saying that there should be more suggestion that cases may be linked as opposed to making the connection straight away.
Could develop more slowly for example, just Cooper and forensics before sawyer and Kowalski arrive at the end.
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